The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/18
Great explanation and summary. Difficult to do well with the 750 word limit!
Interesting and informative.
07/23/18
Wow! I learned some new things by reading your well-informed article. The only red ink I would suggest is to break up your 2nd and 3rd paragraphs more. Since they're rather long it might stop your readers from wanting to tackle them. I have a friend who tells me, when critiquing my stories, it's not that people are too lazy to read it's that they're too busy. They feel reading is more doable in smaller bites. Thanks for sharing and teaching this old dog new tricks. Oh, one more thing - if you used footnotes from your Bible or gleaned some of the information from someone else's research in compiling your article, make sure to offer a bibliography as to where the information came from. Keep up the good work.
This would make an outstanding Bible study. There were a lot of things I didn't know or remember. If you did turn it into a Bible study (maybe write one study for each feast), you could add some thought-provoking questions to pull the reader in and make her think how and why this is still relevant today. I enjoyed your take on the topic and think you had a clear objective. Nicely done.
This would make an outstanding Bible study. There were a lot of things I didn't know or remember. If you did turn it into a Bible study (maybe write one study for each feast), you could add some thought-provoking questions to pull the reader in and make her think how and why this is still relevant today. I enjoyed your take on the topic and think you had a clear objective. Nicely done.
07/26/18
Congratulations on your first place in Beginners. Well done. Keep writing.