The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/18
You have a good start with your ideas here. I think you could expand and add more details to your ideas, like giving life examples. It would also be good to better distinguish between when you are quoting or referencing scripture and when you returning to your own ideas.
06/15/18
How True! It's hard to know when people are leveling with us. Well done being on topic.