The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes honesty is the best policy in everything we do. It is good to learn from our mistakes. Great message. Watch out for missing words and sentence structure. You are talented and will get better as you hone yours skills.
Thank you for your honesty. You’ve shown how easy it is for couples to get off on the wrong foot if they’re not honest with each other. I’m glad you and Kevin were able to work things out. Just one teeny tip. You don’t really need to say things like ‘as human beings, it is ... ‘. You can jump straight in and just say what it is. Good job on a difficult topic.
06/08/18
Thank you for sharing your "heart and soul" with us in this painfully honest entry, which has an important message attached as well.

It was well written and certainly on topic, may His light shine upon you and yours always.

Great writing...

Blessings~
06/08/18
Good job presenting an honest and difficult account. I think you could make this piece more dynamic by including dialogue between the characters.
06/14/18
Great honesty is the path to health and healing your honesty is encouraging good writing
08/06/18
Great.nothing remains covered forever its important for us to be sincere because lying can cause a lot of destruction. Good work