The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/18
Powerful in content, delivery, and overall message!

My heart was touched by your entry...excellent.

Blessings~
Hi...Your piece was very evocative to me. You write extremely well. You missed a word and a comma, but you truly are a good writer. So, keep at it, and I am sure you will go far!
I am living your comments, a husband with Alzheimer’s who frequently forgets who I am or where we are. Joy in Jesus is possible. I find grace and hope in each day. Thank you for your caring heart.

Your writing would benefit from some help with editing and proofreading. It is very difficult to read our own writing objectively and see the flaws and errors. I read my pieces over and over and seem to change something all the time. It is hard work but very satisfying. Keep up the good work.
I am living your comments, a husband with Alzheimer’s who frequently forgets who I am or where we are. Joy in Jesus is possible. I find grace and hope in each day. Thank you for your caring heart.

Your writing would benefit from some help with editing and proofreading. It is very difficult to read our own writing objectively and see the flaws and errors. I read my pieces over and over and seem to change something all the time. It is hard work but very satisfying. Keep up the good work.