The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
Amen and Amen!
Well written and well said
Blessings~
04/26/18
I think you have described in a very succinct and beautiful way why we need salvation and how we can obtain it through Christ. Great job!
04/26/18
I really liked the last line. Well done.
The Sound of Love sounded amazing. Good job, mate! Pay attention to punctuation, though, and incomplete sentences. Other than that, remember you are a real writer who just needs to learn to polish his work more. But keep at it, and you'll just keep getting better. You already are pretty good now. Love and blessings...Norm
The message is beautiful. You are a strong writer you'll get better in time. Keep writing
The sound of love is amazing and it is also amazing to see the obeying of God's word because of our love for him.

Good use of God's word in the Bible lesson or devotion.
Wonderful Truths!!

However, the format made it difficult to navigate so many wonderful thoughts. I am unsure how it would work best, but I was tempted to leave the piece after a few sentences because it seemed so jumbled and jammed together. Perhaps spacing and paragraphs would solve the problem.

Keep sings God’s praises! Blessings.