The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/18
Amen!

Great message, well done,

Blessings~
02/08/18
Beautiful thoughts. Well done.
This is a riveting story. I think you took it in a great direction. I did wonder if you meant us (like in people) or US (as in the country). I decided you did mean people, although the country would work too. You have a strong message in this interesting piece.
Beautifully put.
Thank you. God bless.
02/10/18
Nice essay. Thank you for sharing.
02/10/18
Outstanding. Wonderful thoughts and great take on the topic. Take your time and reread it over and over to clean up the little tech problems. Wfiting is about drawing on your emktions and pulling the emotions out of the reader. Great potential. Keep writing. God bless.
04/02/18
Such a lovely perspective you have! I see it the same
way and agree with you totally.