The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/18
Loved your use of the topic and the beautiful message at the close of your entry.
Well done,
Blessings~
02/08/18
Nicely done!
You make some great points. Although as a redhead myself, it wasn't thought beautiful by my peers growing up. I was tormented! But now that I can appreciate it and others pay tons to replicate it, it's turning gray. Who says God doesn't have a sense of humor? Teehee.

I figured a lot of people would write about Jesus' blood and list things that are red. While you're definitely on topic, it may not be as out of the box as some others. One of the best pieces of advice I received about writing on topic was to write down the first five things I think of, then throw it away because those are likely what others think if too. If you feel God wants you to write on one of those ideas, try to make it unique by using a different voice or POV.

Your article was fun to read. The pacing fit nicely with the ideas--fast and direct. Your message is a great one too. We are so blessed to have such a wonderful God.
My attention was engaged from the beginning to the end. The ending was well thought out.

My only negative comment is the lack of paragraph breaks. I would find it easier to read through with the paragraph breaks put in.

God Bless.
02/10/18
Interesting piece. Thank you for sharing.
02/10/18
It was a fun read for me. My mind kept searching for relevance in my oun life. I was exhausted at the end. I would have loved to have seen you expand on one of those topics. You have so much potential. Keep up the good writing.
02/15/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the Beginners category, Donna.