The Official Writing Challenge
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As I read a sentence or two I had to rearrange a modifier or two for me to get the full intention of your sentences. One word was spelled correctly but was not the word you had intended it to be. You may have left out one word in a sentence towards the end of you article. I just added a word to complete the sentence. Sometimes you can catch these by reading your piece one word at a time pointing to each word you say.

I think when you feel uncomfortable in a crowd that is acting or talking in a certain way, it is God's Holy Spirit letting you know that's not the way you should act or talk.

You have good thoughts so keep writing.