The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting read. It made me smile.

I'd suggest you break it down into shorter paragraphs and maybe even expand a bit with details about body language, thoughts, and dialog while you're watching the game.

I've never been into sports much, but my son went to Duke (another Blue team) and kids would camp out to get tickets for the games (more basketball than football, but either way jot my idea of fun!)

I think my son would understand your passion. You did a nice job of thinking outside of the box but still being on topic.