The Official Writing Challenge
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This is full of honesty and raw emotions. I can definitely relate to feeling stressed and overwhelmed.

I'd urge you to ask someone to read your story aloud to you before you submit. If she stumbles, then you might need to tweak some sentences. It will also help you catch any mistakes or repeating too many words.

You've laid a great foundation for a powerful devotion here. Keep writing and let God continue to guide you.