The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/17
Love the story of Nehemiah! Well done. Other than perhaps some work on slipping between present and past tense rather than settling on one or the other, this is a good read.
Great job crafting your story on Nehemiah.

"Build that Wall" reminded me of the people are saying in the United States.

I liked the flow of the story.
09/15/17
Great job with the topic!
Blessings~
09/19/17
God can do in seconds what it takes man to do in years.
Rebecca,

Congratulations on your 1st place finish. You've now graduated to the Intermediate Division.

09/21/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Beginners category, Rebecca.

I liked your descriptive style and look forward to reading more of your entries.