The Official Writing Challenge
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I am so sorry you were bullied in school.

I liked how the main character perservered over such difficult circumstances throughout his or her life.

The person returned you to God.
09/07/17
I'm sorry you had to go through all that. It takes courage to recount those kinds of things.

Red Ink: to bring a greater story telling element in, try adding more description. For example: i was a scrawny kid with glasses... Or the guys were big: the kind of guys who starred on the football team...
09/08/17
It is difficult to be a target of bullies. Congratulations on getting your certificate.
09/08/17
Thank you for sharing your heart and journey with us.

I was bullied in school, and beaten to a pulp...it's not easy. But, praise God, He was with me always, as well as loving parents who guided me along the rough terrain.

So glad you felt the LORD pulling you back and realized He is ever faithful.

Blessings~
This is a nicely written personal story that illustrates some of the things that Jesus lived and was tested in. He experienced all things just as we are tested in. We can sometimes fail in our testing but he never failed. Even on the cross he said, "Father, forgive them. They do not know what they do." This is how he know how we feel and he can comfort and strengthen us in our trials.

Keep writing about your trials as they illustrate the trials that Jesus went through so he would know how we feel going through the same kind of trial.
09/13/17
You are very clear and articulate in your writing - I would never have guessed you might have been slow at learning in school - bravo for your achievements in life and writing! I only caught one small "typo" in the last sentence I believe you meant to write has instead of as. Keep writing!
Cheryl,

Thank you for participating in the Faithwriter's Challenge.

I appreciated that you let the readers know how bullying can leave scars for a lifetime.

Sharing your story can help many people.
09/14/17
Congratulations on finishing 3rd place in the Beginner's category. Thank you for sharing your story of God's continuing grace in your life.