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08/11/17
Your article was well written, I like the idea of God using an eraser, and several other visual ideas. Also the idea God does not have to go back to the drawing board, he has the vision for us from eternity.
I enjoyed your thought on this subject.
08/11/17
​I want to shout, "Amen!" This sounded like a sermon. Very well articulated. This one line, "each day is only a new copy, not a replacement of the original plan." really tugged my heart.

Punctuation is missed in many places. I encourage you to go to Jan's Writing Basics on the Forums, and check out her many, quick lessons. I found them very helpful.
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewforum.php?f=67&sid=94d56cc91914a24057086a73c787cff5

This is very well written. A winner in my book. I hope this does well with the judges.
Good lesson. I found myself thinking, though, that God does not need to go back to the drawing board, but has a heavenly blueprint.

We need to go back to the drawing board, though, and I think that is what you were trying to say. Our sin causes us to deviate from God's plan for us.

Our life falls on Christ, our Cornerstone. That was a great part. Good lesson. Thank you.
This is a well written piece and has some good points listed as well.

Keep your eyes in his word.
08/13/17
A good hook, and I liked the Bible quotes. Well done. I think we will see some good devotionals from you.
08/14/17
Love this.
Well done,
Blessings~