The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/17
Wow! Masterfully done. You certainly don't belong in this level.

Very engaging and creative. It flowed well and kept this reader interested.

Hit the topic, had a good hook and well crafted. I see great things in your future writing.

Outstanding. God bless.
08/11/17
I like the imagery of this - making us see the possibility of building with water. I can see this as part of whole novel. Keep writing!
08/11/17
Very creative. How Greg kept working on his tower reminded me that's what writers do; we keep working on our words. You have good, descriptive imagery. Keep writing.
Imagination, conflict, emotion, and failure. What will come next?

We will just have to wait.
08/13/17
Very well done! I see a Fantasy novelist in the making. Blessings.
08/14/17
Excellent!!
Blessings~
08/17/17
WOOO HOOO! You did it!
What a great story--good characters, conflict and excellent writing. First Place --Congratulation!
08/22/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Beginners category, Stephen. I wouldn't be surprised if you placed in the top fifteen.

You had a terrific story hook and were right on topic. I can see great potential and wouldn't be surprised if you rise through the ranks quickly.