The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done!
So many blessings we take for granted. Good entry. God bless.
Your devotional spoke to my heart. God is always answering our prayers; its the no and wait answers that we struggle with. Thank you for reminding me to look on life with the right perspective.
You remind me of myself when I thought God didn't care. Well done. Keep up the good work. God bless you.
What a great way to show how we need to step back and realize we don't have it as bad as we think we do.
Thankfulness does something to the inside which shows on the outside.

Nice writing.
Thanks for reminding us that we have so much to be thankful of. Relaxing doesn't come easy to some of us who feel we must be doing something. Some times we are so run down that we have to take time out and take care of ourselves. Even Jesus relaxed when He went to a wedding, spent time with His friends Martha, Mary and Lazarus. We ought to follow His example. There is a time to work and a time to rest.
This is nice. I enjoyed your subtle sense if humor. You seem to be a natural. One way to possibly challenge yourself is write this in the second person with tongue in cheek. Almost like a how to be a nervous Nellie type of story. Of course you can't do that every time, but in this case, I think focusing on your sense if humor would make this good story even better. I like the way you handled the topic and delivered a powerful message.
Your story touches on the "nerves" of so many truths. You did a fine job of conveying thoughts. Nice job of writing. Keep it up.