The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/17
Great Job!
Blessings~
05/27/17
You have some really good ideas here that are well worth putting into practice. Reading the Bible is such a blessing to our day, but might I suggest you read aloud whatever you write which will help you with grammar and punctuation. Well done and keep writing. Blessings.
05/29/17
Good job on the topic. We make too much time for our phones and texting and not enough time in our Bibles or with the Lord.
05/30/17
Wow! You're definitely a writer. Your writing flows, and we can see you have put a great deal of effort on it.

The topic was well worked, and you expressed your point of view with passion. However, I found some problems with the grammar. I have this problem too.

Perhaps "Writing Lessons with Jan and Ann", at the Forum page, would be useful to you. It has been to me.

Blessing.