The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/17
I liked the way you separated your paragraphs and expressed your ideas on how important is communication to our lives. You also didn't forget to mention the topic. Good job!

As a beginner(and having English as my second language), I'm struggling with the way I break my sentences. I also have some difficulties with the punctuation and parallel structure.

A good soul, seeing my problem, gave me the suggestion to go to the FaithWriters forum and look at the resources. I found plenty of information and teachings there, specifically in "Ann's Grammar Basics" and "Jan's Writing Basics".

Maybe you could give a look on Ann and Jan's topics and see if there's something there for you too.

Keep writing, never give up!
Blessings



05/27/17
Thanks for sharing your story with us. It is a courageous and cathartic soul wrenching journey to do so, as you've described.

May God bless you~