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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: TEXTING (05/18/17)
Communicating our needs can be pretty important when we want to express our views. For example, during the coffee break program in the church, which I attended I mentioned that of worrying about commercialism and gifts at Christmas time, we also have to focus on the real meaning of Christmas which "Christ The Lord."

Just recently I gave out my testimony as to why I attended the "Freedom Session" at the church. I said something which was not easy for me such say. I mentioned that I had suicidal thoughts in my past as well as alcoholism. I mentioned that I had drunk a lot of booze when I had to tell my story when I first began to attend the F.S program.

Sometimes it is good to text people by using a mobile phone. I don't often text very often. I text or phone to let my family know where I am, and where they are. Texting has become a very convenient way of communicating to people.

During church or bible study, texting does not have to be a necessity at all. Listening to a pastor or a person on a one to one basis can actually create better interaction with that person instead of texting or phone or by email.
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Eneida Moscon
05/26/17
I liked the way you separated your paragraphs and expressed your ideas on how important is communication to our lives. You also didn't forget to mention the topic. Good job!

As a beginner(and having English as my second language), I'm struggling with the way I break my sentences. I also have some difficulties with the punctuation and parallel structure.

A good soul, seeing my problem, gave me the suggestion to go to the FaithWriters forum and look at the resources. I found plenty of information and teachings there, specifically in "Ann's Grammar Basics" and "Jan's Writing Basics".

Maybe you could give a look on Ann and Jan's topics and see if there's something there for you too.

Keep writing, never give up!
Blessings



C D Swanson 
05/27/17
Thanks for sharing your story with us. It is a courageous and cathartic soul wrenching journey to do so, as you've described.

May God bless you~