The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/17
You highlight some very important truths - well done.
05/05/17
Interesting and complex story, reminded me of an old Twilight Zone story.

Well done!

Blessings~
05/09/17
An interesting allegory which, with a bit of work could be made slightly clearer.
We are certainly here to do God's bidding. Perhaps the fact that we do it out of love for Him could be woven more into the story.