The Official Writing Challenge
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Great wrap up with a fantastic message.

Good job with the topic.

I liked the personal flavor of your piece. For the title, you would probably want the word "An" instead of "A".

Also the spell check did not catch the "on" instead of "one" in a sentence.

One sentence has "If we are look". What you probably want to say is "If we are looking" because there is another "ing" word that comes later.

After you talked about Joseph, you need to start another paragraph about your "accident".

I thought your concluding sentence said it all very nicely. Good work.