The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/17
It certainly could have been a lot worse, but things do happen. I'm glad that it was worked out in an "easy way" sometimes people get so overly angry.

Good job with the topic.

Blessings~
Thank you for your good "confessional". There are a few minor grammar errors but practice "heals all" wounds. You did well.

You left part of a sentence out or misspelled "where" as "were".

The last two "forgives" at the end would have sounded better as "forgave".

If I told about my first accident I would have to say the the white paint from the barn that jumped out at me never wore off the left rear fender of Dad's car.

I enjoyed your story.