The Official Writing Challenge
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I like thoughts and ideas expressed in poetic form. It makes for nice reading.

One thing I would consider about the Laodicean Church though, because Jesus calls them lukewarm, is that they may have failed in living according to the teachings (rules, and commandments) given by Jesus in the sermon on the mount (Matt. 5 - 7) When we don't follow Jesus' rules and commandments, we also could be called lukewarm and that will not be good for us on the day of judgement.
One of the hallmarks of good free verse poetry is more poetic language. I'd like to see more metaphors and similes here, or symbolism, or simply words with more imagery. Poetry should read differently than prose, apart from just being differently arranged.
Congratulations, Caleb, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

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