The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/16
Very entertaining & fun to read. Light hearted yet capturing the humiliation of the MC. I would suggest leaving out any unneeded words around the dialogue, like she said, or that she took the paper. The dialogue flows just fine without it. Delightful storytelling ...I've tried to use coupons at the wrong store before so I can relate to this...
An entertaining, well written life story we can all be smiling about.

Good conversations illustrated.
11/14/16
Great story! I could feel your emotions through the writing.
11/17/16
I really enjoyed your story and could totally relate to the public embarrassment. Good job and congratulations on your first place win!
11/17/16
Congratulations on your 1st place win in level 1. Well done.
11/17/16
Congratulations, Claire, on winning 1st place in the Beginners category and moving up to the Intermediate category.

Delightful storytelling. I wish we had a Winn Dixie store here too. I've never gone to the wrong store, but I did forget to bring my wallet and had to put everything back.

I would suggest you double space between paragraphs for easier reading.
12/12/16
You had me confused. I thought it was a typo until I realized it was intentionally part of your story. Ha -good one and congratulations on your level win.