The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/16
This is a well thought out article with an excellent message. I did see a thought that is punctuated as dialogue, and the next to the last paragraph was a little confusing- maybe some missing or wrong words- I'm not sure. Over all I enjoyed it.
Our faithfulness to God is shown by doing whatever he has commanded us. This is being faithful -- not doing good works.

Your evening prayers should have turned to (1 John 5:16-18)

I liked how you gave an example to us of how we can encourage each other about not sinning with our tongue. You had an excellent opportunity to encourage your friend about being careful about unkind words.

Thanks for your well written personal story.
11/17/16
Congratulations, Cheryl, on winning highly commendable in the Beginner category.

While I do agree that church staff shouldn't be held to a higher standard, I do think Kate was rude and owed the woman a simple apology.