The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting life story. We, each, have done embarrassing things that are just accidents and are not planned.

I found a few extra words that made the flow of the story a little broken. Read the story, one word at a time, and see if you can find them.
11/14/16
This would make a delightful little story by adding some dialogue, rounding out your descriptions and action, and building up to your embarrassing faux pas. (At least you didn't tip over the cup, as I did once, all over my friend and her daughter.) Keep writing!
11/17/16
I once spilled a half of pot of coffee on a woman's white dress at a church dinner, so I can imagine your embarrassment. Unfortunately, accidents do happen.

I think you should begin in the art gallery in Algonquin Park and use dialog to build up the conflict. The 2nd paragraph is unnecessary because it doesn't relate to the coffee incident in any way.

Keep writing! Try to read the Editors Choice winners each week to get new ideas.