The Official Writing Challenge
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This is worth every ones reading. In the last sentence we must see the cross as it opens our eyes to the one on the cross. Then each Sunday we review the scene as we recognize the resurrection of Jesus by partaking of the bread and juice which represents his body and blood.

Well written piece.
11/06/16
This is excellent. If prose causes me to pause and read and re-read a line and then think about it - then I know its a worthwhile poem or story. Great job!
Excellent! Your words have blessed my weary soul this morning.
11/11/16
Beautifully touching where I am at.
11/12/16
Congratulations, Janet, on winning 1st place in the Beginners category and moving up to the Intermediate category.

Your poem had a psalm like quality. Very good use of imagery.
11/20/16
Congratulations on your level win with this lovely piece of poetry.