The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting commentary on being "too talkative". Some recognize it while others don't. I liked the change she "was force" to make.

The one thing that jumped out at me was the last "Pam's". I would have just had the word "Pam".

A creative work.
09/19/16
Well done.

God bless~