The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
Very well-written, with a great lesson for us all!

I wonder if you should end with "...gently took Mary's hand in hers." It seems that there is where the lesson is learned. And be careful of woman / women.

You've written a pastor with a tender, forgiving heart. Beautifully done.
01/15/06
I don't have anything to add to Jan's critique of this piece, she capture everything I was feeling/thinking.

Good job, thanks for sharing.
Oops! I needed to log in, and now my critique is lost in cyberspace! Excellent illustration of Jesus' most-quoted but seldom acted-upon statements! You have done well!