The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this and especially the opening story. It introduces us to the subject of the lesson it teaches.

Before we are a Christian the Holy Spirit can use God's word to work on our minds encouraging us to believe. When we believe what the Bible says about who Jesus is and repent of our sin and are baptized for the forgiveness of our sin we are given the gift of the Holy Spirit who then will work on our heart since he lives in us.

Again,I liked it.
09/12/16
A good opening illustration with a clear message, though it would be a little clearer to develop one biblical example instead of sweeping across several of them. Your heart is to write - so follow your heart and may God bless your ministry and those you reach for him.