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This is a nice collection of verses that make your point. It is important to be on the lookout for traps and dirty tricks from Satan. I'd urge you to go a step farther and include an experience where you felt like you were being tricked and how God helped you (or perhaps someone else) through that time. It will make it more personable and help the reader relate. I can feel your passion to share the Word with others. If you've never submitted a devotion to FW daily devotions, I'd urge you to consider doing so.
You did well with your topic on prayer, starting off with the key word of the week.One thing I would add would be to look at the command to examine ourselves each week as we remember the death of Jesus by taking the bread and juice.(1 Cor. 11:23-33)

good work putting it all together. We need to remember all of it.
09/11/16
A Great reminder on prayer. I needed this today. Thanks. God bless.
09/12/16
Thanks for this devotional, which brings us a lot to think about.
Shann's point about adding personal experience is a good one. You certainly have room here, as you have used less than half the word-limit, and it would enable you to step into showing as well as telling.