The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/16
Well done!

Blessings~
I liked how the coming wedding turned your heart to your own marriage.

There are minor spelling errors you could fix. Words are spelled correctly but have the wrong tense.

I liked the personal thoughts that came out in this writing.
09/04/16
Hi,
Thanks for sharing. I also liked how the upcoming marriage made you reflect on your own and turn it into a prayer for both.

I believe mirrors should be without an s.

Don't forget the periods (full-stops)!

Your use of imagery was stupendous.
09/09/16
Congratulations on your 3rd place ranking. Well done. I
09/09/16
Congratulations on your 3rd place ranking. Well done. I