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A very nice expression of the tides of marriage, both ebb and flow.

I like the rhythm of the lines to be as similar as possible. This takes work getting the right words to fit and say what you want. Sometimes word order works and sometimes make your own contractions of words.

Faithful till death in our married life and faithful till death in our spiritual life has rewards.
09/03/16
I loved this.
Well done.
Blessings~
I loved this!

The lovebirds chirping is such a cute image and love changing shape a strong message that lovebirds today need to hear.

I hope this is your life story because it makes me happy to think some lovebirds do keep chirping.
09/05/16
A lovely story. I especially enjoyed the variety of wording you used. This one in particular really caught my eye:
Now life is less about lace but more about strength.
What a great entry.
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