The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of fun to read. Watch your grammar and punctuation (we all need to). Great job, keep writing.
I really enjoyed your entry. Well done!

I didn't get the connection as to who "Alice" was until the very end since there was not other character named.

It would be easier to know how to comment on this piece if I knew if it was a true story or fiction.
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