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This is really quite delightful. I enjoyed how you told a portion of your life in the beginning. It made it easy to relate and pulled me in.

You have quite a few spots where you are missing commas, and for me, capitalizing the first letter of every word related to God distracts me from your beautiful message. This is just my opinion, but those extra caps feel like you're trying too hard to make it important. You don't need to do that because you have such a wonderful way with your words. Technically, the experts even say you don't need to cap God pronouns, but since some people feel strongly about that, most leave it up to the author.

You did a great job of writing on topic in a fresh (just a little pun intended) and fun way. Add a Scripture and prayer and you will have a powerful devotion. If you've never written any for FW daily devotions, I'd urge you to do so. You have a wonderful gift. I see great things happening with your writings.