The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a great job of taking a verse and explaining it in a way that makes it easy to understand. At first I thought the transition from fireworks to Jesus was a bit abrupt, but after reading it again, I can see the links. You did a nice job.
06/17/16
Very creative work, though if you had outlined a few more examples of what we see as 'fizzles' on earth' you could have bridged to the eternal stage more smoothly and with even greater reassurance.
06/18/16
Thanks for the reminder that one day we will live with our Father.
06/22/16
Beautifully expressed.

Blessings~
06/23/16
Congrats!


Blessings~
06/23/16
Congratulations, Gloria, on placing highly commended this week in the Beginners category.

Your poem painted several examples of how things fizzle out.
06/25/16
Congratulations on your highly commended poem.