The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/16
Very strong, fresh and descriptive characterisation of this bible event. Well done.
06/15/16
I enjoyed your interpretation of this biblical story.

Showing the bravery of this woman, her faith that if she could just get close enough to Jesus, she would be healed.

Taking us back to that day and the creative way you brought the story to life.

Very nice.

06/16/16
Congratulations, Gloria, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category.

I liked the way your retelling of this Bible story incorporated several of the five senses, especially smell.