The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/16
Free verse for a free spirit. You've touched on some compelling thoughts and I like your last verse.
This is lovely. It flows nicely and is full of passion. I especially liked the line I have a distinct destiny. I think I'm going to write it on my window for when I get discouraged. Nice job.
06/15/16
Beautifully written. Capturing the challenges and struggles all the while wishing for a more carefree life.

Enjoyed this piece very much.
Blessings.
06/16/16
Congratulations, Caleb, on placing 3rd place in the Beginners category.

Your poem had much wisdom woven within it. Humans will encounter stress, but we need to continually drop it at Jesus' feet.
Very nicely written Caleb. Everything we do on earth prepares us for our heavenly home.