The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/16
Informative. I think it needed something to rev up the interest level, at least for me.
You have a delightful, yet subtle sense of humor that I truly enjoy. I could relate to your love of tools. I have a similar affair with crafts, all kinds of them surround my bedroom. I do try to use them to glorify God, often praying while I craft. My red ink is minor. In the first line of second sentence the word that should be who (that mistake is my new mission to help fix ;) I think you did a nice job of writing on topic while delivering a relatable message. You did a nice job on this piece.
There was a time that I thought you were diverting from your highly emotional topic of tools but I am glad you brought it all back together.

You had a nice way of bringing your topic of tools all together.
05/31/16
Well done! I enjoyed this entire piece with a great message too!

Blessings~
06/02/16
A nicely written devotional. The computer is a powerful tool that can be used for good or evil.