The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job of writing on topic and delivering a message we all need to hear from time to time. Your words seemed to flow nicely off the page.
I like the combined thoughts in this writing. Should I fix it or do without? What would be best? Can I use it without it being NUMBER ONE?

Each one reading this should look to his own use and examine himself where it is in his life. IT CAN'T BE NUMBER ONE AND ALSO BE PLEASING TO GOD.

I liked your thought. Could you easily make this into a thoughtful teaching devotional?
05/31/16
Excellent!

Blessings~
06/01/16
I agree that this flowed very well. I really like the idea of "bad master, but a good servant." Well written!
06/02/16
Congratulations, Caleb, on placing 2nd place in the Beginners category. You have really developed as a poet, and I can't wait to see you in the number one spot.
Caleb I liked all the thouhht that went into yhis poem. it had a nice flow.

Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the beginnrrs.