The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/16
That's a cool story. I felt it was well written and absorbing. You have a rocket.
05/28/16
A fascinating Sci Fi story. Well done and I hope you place well.
Your excellent use of dialogue carried this story, and its subdued conflict to a satisfying conclusion.
I enjoyed this delightful sci-fi story. You did a nice job of using body language (even on the AI) and dialog to develop characters. My only read ink is remember to capitalize the Bible in Bible since it is the name of a book. You did a great job of writing on topic. Computer was one of the main themes in the story and you couldn't write the story without it, which is one way to see if your story is on topic. Your message is a strong one too.
If only Cessena could be converted. But, of course, Jesus didn't die for any computer.

Nice outer space story.
05/31/16
Great message in this well written piece.

Blessings~
06/02/16
Congratulations, Dennis, on your well deserved 1st place award in the Beginners category and moving up to the Intermediate category.

Artificial intelligence can't answer every question in life.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 17 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
Congratulations, Dennis, on your 1st and 17th placements! I look forward to reading more of your writing.
I enjoyrd this Sci-fi story. The characters were well developrd. I may have formatted your story so it was easier to read.

Congratulations on your 2st place in the beginner category and look forward to reading more of your work in the Intermediate Level.
06/23/16
You crafted an interesting tale with a timeless message. Congrats on your level win.