The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/16
You have the beginnings of a good story. You just have to develop it more. You don't need to explain to the reader who the little sneak is. Most would have already guessed or would like to create their own ending.
05/21/16
Brief and to the point. It was well done.
You made a good start. But more about how this relationship turned out could make it an even better story. The possibilities are endless.
05/26/16
Enjoyed this!

Blessings~