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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Sneak (05/12/16)
Was it a dark night when he went out alone to the enemy’s camp? Did he lurk in the shadows and avoid the main streets as he made his way to see the Master’s enemies? Perhaps he wore dark clothes so he could not be seen as he slithered into what may have been the side entrance of the Temple to trade with the chief priests.

His devious plan was to betray Christ and he was well paid as he knew he would be. The key would be a kiss!
To use a kiss, which is a sign of love to perform an act of such hate on the Son of The God of love was unforgivable.

Yes, I believe that Jesus knew his plan!
He knew it from the beginning, even as he knew he was a thief on the day He gave him the job of keeping the purse that first day.

As they ate the broken bread and drank wine together that day, He knew the culprit’s plan. Yet he sent him on his way to perform the unthinkable act. His words tell us that he knew.

“The Son of Man goes as it is written of him.” said Jesus “Woe unto that man by whom the Son of Man is betrayed! It had been good for that man if he had never been born”.

The betrayer’s answer “Rabbi, is it I?” speaks of his pretentious humility. {Matthew 26: 21- 25;Luke 22:21-23}.

What deceit! What guile! He was a man possessed by satan the deceiver, so what other fruit could Judas produce?
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Art Westefeld
05/19/16
Yawn. It is so simple to rewrite a Bible Story. Try something original next time.
Bonnie Bowden 
05/20/16
I think Art's comments are too harsh. Rewriting a well known Bible story is difficult because you have to make it your own. It is like re-preforming Michael Jackson's song,Thriller. People don't want to see you trying to be Michael Jackson; they want to see your own style.

Virgil Youngblood 
05/25/16
Short and too the point. Definitely on topic. The last sentence should challenge every reader to examine whether their walk is pleasing to the Lord.
C D Swanson 
05/26/16
Wonderful approach to the topic, I love Biblical accounts and yours was well done.

Blessings~
Bonnie Bowden 
05/26/16
Congratulations, Gloria, on winning highly commendable in the Beginners Category. I'm glad your piece was recognized.