The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/16
Yawn. It is so simple to rewrite a Bible Story. Try something original next time.
05/19/16
I think Art's comments are too harsh. Rewriting a well known Bible story is difficult because you have to make it your own. It is like re-preforming Michael Jackson's song,Thriller. People don't want to see you trying to be Michael Jackson; they want to see your own style.

Short and too the point. Definitely on topic. The last sentence should challenge every reader to examine whether their walk is pleasing to the Lord.
05/26/16
Wonderful approach to the topic, I love Biblical accounts and yours was well done.

Blessings~
05/26/16
Congratulations, Gloria, on winning highly commendable in the Beginners Category. I'm glad your piece was recognized.