The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/16
Excellent job, excellent message, and well done.
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05/12/16
I learned some new information reading your article.

Your first sentence is a run-on because it combines two sentences together without a semicolon or a comma and a conjunction.
05/13/16
Yes, there were 2 or 3 areas where you needed some punctuation. Interesting little piece, however.
05/17/16
Strong ideas that you have expressed well, but you since you are well within the word limit, I feel you could have developed them a little more.
This is quite lovely. I like the verses you used. They fit nicely with your description.
05/19/16
Congratulations, Gloria, on your 2nd place in the Beginners category, You had some great descriptions.
05/19/16
Congrats!

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Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 17 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
05/23/16
Congratulations on 2nd Place Level 2 :)