The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
You definitely had me engaged. I wondered if this was a true story, which would explain why you didn't list the company's name. This one thing DID make it feel a bit distant, but I totally understand if that IS the case. Great last line too.
04/21/16
Excellent writing and wonderful job with the topic.

Well done!

Blessings~
04/22/16
Very interesting. I enjoyed it. I noticed a couple of things I think were probably typos where words were omitted. I can't remember them now that I;m on this screen. One was in the 2nd paragraph and the other in the last or next to last para.
04/28/16
Congrats!

Blessings~
04/28/16
Congratulations, Raymond, on your 1st place in the Beginners Category and advancing to the Intermediate category. I am glad integrity won out in the end. Your plot was well thought out. My favorite line was: Stress was high, and just as stock prices rise and fall, so do the fortunes of those trading them.

You were missing part of the verb in the following sentence: A down-swing [had] plagued the corporation for a while now.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 17 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
Thanks, everyone, for your feedback and comments.
05/15/16
I liked how you put it-"God-had just been an add-on to my life."

Unfortunately that seems to happen more often than I'd like to consider...

Nicely written and congratulations on your level win.