The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
This was a great story! It kept my attention from start to finish!

Blessings~
I liked the story. Unfortunately, this is a reality for a lot of couples.
God Bless.
04/22/16
Good story. It kept my attention all the way through.
04/23/16
This story had good pace and flow from beginning to end. Even though the odds are stacked against the gambler, many people think that they are only one number or card away from winning the jackpot.

Well written.

Season ticket does not need to be capitalized.
04/28/16
Congrats!

Blessings~
04/28/16
Congratulations, GiGi, on placing 3rd place in the Beginner category. Your story captured the addictive quality of gambling.