The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/16
Excellent! Great job with the topic...

Blessings~
This is a powerful testimony. You did a nice job of telling your story while staying on topic. Personally, I don't think you needed the opening paragraph because your story shows what slander can do to a person. I think you did a good job and I look forward to reading more of your work.
03/17/16
Being falsely accused is very difficult to overcome. I'm glad the MC was given a fair chance by the other teacher.

I don't think you need the first paragraph because it doesn't allow the reader to come to his or her own conclusion during the story.
I was heart broken that someone tried to maleign your good character. I noticed a small typo organization instead organisation.

This was well written and was on topic.