The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job.
God is awesome like that.
Blessing
03/10/16
You did a good job writing dialogue in this story. I could really relate to missing an appointment because I got the date or time wrong.

Red Ink: Emery left a high paying job [to go] going out on his own.
03/11/16
Very cute. I really enjoyed this story. Red ink: I think you misused commas and semi-colons - sometimes using one when it should have been the other.
03/11/16
I really thought this a clever and enjoyable read!

God bless~
03/11/16
Quite creative with the topic. Good job!
03/12/16
Well done!
03/17/16
Congratulations, Don, on placing highly commendable in the Beginners Category.
03/22/16
Don - Great job. It is so good to know that God works like that in our lives. There are no accidents with Him.

Congratulations on your HC.