The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Awwww. I loved this!
Well done.
Blessings~
03/05/16
What a touching story. I liked the MCs interaction with her father.
03/08/16
What makes this work is that in (apparently) the last time she saw her grandfather, she saw a softness and faith she'd never noticed before--and has perennials to remind her. Good story.
03/10/16
Congratulations on your first place in the Beginners category, Karen. You really brought the characters alive.
03/11/16
Congratulations on your first place finish. This is a beautiful & well written story.
Congratulations on your 1st place finish. Touching story. Peonies are my favorite flower so I could identify with the MC.
A well written life story.

Several emotions are brought to the surface as it is read.
04/03/16
You crafted a very sweet tribute to an afternoon well spent.