The Official Writing Challenge
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Good message!

Horoscopes are like playing with matches, eventually you will get burned.

I hope the MCs friend started thinking about the true path of a joyous life.
This is a terrific story - I like the way you started it - very creative. I can tell you have loads of talent for creative fiction. Dialogue is compelling too. One suggestion: I assume the reference to Successful Life 101 is the Bible. Somehow I would work it into the dialogue that you mean the bible just to eliminate confusion to any reader that might be totally oblivious to the bible.
Congratulations, Karen, on your highly commended entry in the Beginners category. You have a creative voice, and I hope you keep writing.
Good way to organize a discussion.

Would "opposite of" sound better than "opposite to"?