The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
Good message!

Blessings~
03/04/16
Horoscopes are like playing with matches, eventually you will get burned.

I hope the MCs friend started thinking about the true path of a joyous life.
03/05/16
This is a terrific story - I like the way you started it - very creative. I can tell you have loads of talent for creative fiction. Dialogue is compelling too. One suggestion: I assume the reference to ‘Successful Life 101’ is the Bible. Somehow I would work it into the dialogue that you mean the bible just to eliminate confusion to any reader that might be totally oblivious to the bible.
03/10/16
Congratulations, Karen, on your highly commended entry in the Beginners category. You have a creative voice, and I hope you keep writing.
Good way to organize a discussion.

Would "opposite of" sound better than "opposite to"?