The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/16
I hope the MC never lost the dream to help others walk.
As we learn the gift/talent/desire God has given us, it may take someone to guide us and encourage us to see where we can use those desires.

This could be a good teaching story for young people wondering what to do. First they must learn what they are good at and have an interest in.

The place where God wants us to use our God=given gift may change so we need to be aware of that.

Nice writing. Keep looking at God's word for direction and ideas.
03/10/16
Congratulations, J. E., on your 2nd place entry in the Beginner's category. I hope one of your dreams is to be a writer.
Congratulation on your win J.C.
sometimes a person can't find their way to do what they want, but you helped put things into perspective for Ashley by asking pertinent questions.
God bless.
03/11/16
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish. Well done.
JE, Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the beginning category

Story of courage and determination. I believe there is more to this story than the 750 word minimum would allow.

Could she learn to walk again or would she have to adapt to her current situation.

Well done.