The Official Writing Challenge
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02/29/16
nice kept me looking toward what comes next. Liked how you made the "divine" connection as part of the short story.
03/01/16
This story had a good flow to it. It kept me guessing.
This is great. You do a nice job of developing the suspense. I think you nailed the topic. Although the general idea has been done before, you put your own spin on it making it refreshing and a delightful read. Great job.
03/03/16
Congratulations on winning third place in the beginners category, Kelly.

Well done.
03/03/16
Congratulations on your 3rd Place finish!
I enjoyed this story. I thought the dialogue was well done, too. Congrats on a well deserved 3rd place win!